The setting:Wild Beach.
The summary:
Jerry ,a young English boy and his mother enjoy spending at the beach.They are both unfamiliar with the beach.Each of them try to surprise the other without revealing too much detail demand.The next morning,Jerry explores a wild and a rocky bay,yet he had a glimpse at on their way there.Jerry likes playing at the crowded"safe beach".He sees a couple of boys trip their clothes off and run down the rocks.He at first keeps his distance . As time passes he seems towards the boys ,speaking a language he does not understand.They realised that Jerry is a foreiner that ,they forgottern about him.Jerry was verry happy spening time with the boys.He joined them dividing off a high point into the water,for a while.After that , they sat down and had lunch together.Going to the bay became least important to them.
My feellings about the story:
Reading the story,my heart is filled up with a feelling of pride looking at how the boys in the story made friendship with Jerry. Matured it by spending time togetherand sharing the braycing of bbrad.
The main character:
Jerry:A eleven year old boy who is a quite chaldish and a good swimmer.He is jelous of the older boys and he atempts to make friends with them.
5/10. You have copied and few mistakes were made but great job.
ReplyDeletewhat proof do you have that i copied.i summarized everything!
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